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Rewrite for a frontline reader

Turn a desk-worker email into something a deskless employee reads on a phone in one go.

The prompt

Rewrite this for a frontline employee reading on a phone between tasks.

Scope: the whole email.
Rules: under 120 words; grade 6 reading level; no acronyms; one action, stated in the first two lines with its deadline.
Keep: the effective date, the action, and who to contact.

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How to use

Save the result as a separate email — you will usually send both versions to different audiences.

The prompt

Rewrite this for a frontline employee reading on a phone between tasks.

Scope: the whole email.
Rules: under 120 words; grade 6 reading level; no acronyms; one action, stated in the first two lines with its deadline.
Keep: the effective date, the action, and who to contact.